Feedback for 2nd Magazine Layout

I have gathered some feedback for the second design I created for my magazine layout. I will use these to put towards our final edit of the magazine. The following comments were made:
- Taglines should be added to all photos includeing the two at the top
- Cut out around George shouldn't be soft, making it more blunt will make him look more bold
- Some photos could be sligtly bigger

Again, these are very small changes but they will help to make the final product the best it can be.

Feedback for 2nd Poster Design

I asked people for feedback points on my second design for the magazine cover so I could use this feedback to put towards our final cover. The following comments were made:
- Tagline could be added to give away a bit of information
- Two main characters could be brightened to make them stand out from the crowd
- Rest of the characters should be darkened to give more impact on the main characters
- The eyes should be darkened to make them blend in more and make the image seem even more mysterious

Although these are small changes, they will help to add to a better effect for the final piece.

Feedback for Second Draft of Trailer

As a group we thought it would be a good idea to do several interviews with our peers to gather some feedback points regarding our second draft of our soap opera trailer. We thought this would be a unique way of gathering feedback as aposed to just making notes. These interviews can be found on our group blog here:
http://thejama2.blogspot.com/2011/01/feedback-for-2nd-cut-of-trailer.html

2nd Cut of Trailer

We have completed the second draft of our soap opera trailer, which can be seen on our group blog here:
http://thejama2.blogspot.com/2011/01/2nd-cut-of-trailer.html

To this cut we have added the things people commented on during getting the feedback in order to improve it. We will get more feedback on this edit to make more improvments for our final edit.

2nd Draft of Poster

This is the second draft of my poster including the improvments suggested.

2nd Draft Poster

Poster Design Feedback

I asked for feedback on the poster layout idea I created so I could improve it. The following comments where made:
- could be cropped at the bottom to make it more confinded and so the eyes are the focal point
- text of the title should be bigger so it stands out more, maybe all the way across the top
- characters should be darkened as they look too bright against the black background
- cut out around characters could be better

I will consider these comments when I create my second draft, and when we create our final piece for our poster. I particularly agree with the comments about the title and the cutting out of the characters, I will change the titles around to see what looks best, and try out different font sizes.

Filming Diary

We have created a diary to explain everything that went on during filming. We discuss any problems we had and how we overcame them, and if any scenes went particularly well.